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essay;Compulsory retirement should be abolished?

Compulsory retirement should be abolished?

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In Japan, many companies have adopted compulsory retirement system, but many people would like to work as long as they can. In my opinion, compulsory retirement should be abolished.
Firstly, elderly people have a lot of experiences. In many factories, many elderly people have good experience because they have worked for many years there. As Japan is known for its precise technology such as television sets, and this kind of technology is supported by highly skilled technicians. Companies should hire good technicians as long as they can work.
Secondly, elderly people can not receive enough pensions. Some retired people receive their pensions at the age of sixty, but others receive it at sixty years old, which is decided by the low in Japan. Most of the office workers have to retire when they become sixty years old, thus some of them have to wait five years to receive pensions. Companies should hire employees till they can receive their pensions.
Lastly, many elderly people still have good motivation to work. They still want to work even though they have become sixty years old or more. In the U.S., many people in their sixties or seventies are still working at companies. Many Japanese companies should hire elderly people more.
In conclusion, elderly people have good experience and motivation, but have to wait for years to receive their pensions. I believe that compulsory retirement should be abolished.





【corrected】
In Japan, many companies have adopted a compulsory retirement system, but many people would like to work as long as they can. In my opinion, compulsory retirement should be abolished.
Firstly, elderly people have a lot of experience s . In many factories, many elderly people have good experience because they have worked for many years there. As Japan is known for its precise technology such as television sets, and this kind of technology is supported by highly skilled technicians , companies should hire good technicians as long as they can work.
Secondly, elderly people can not receive enough money from their pension s . Some retired people receive their pension s at the age of sixty , but others receive it at sixty years old, which is decided by the law in Japan. Most of the office workers have to retire when they become sixty years old, thus some of them have to wait five years to receive their pension s . Companies should hire employees till they can receive their pensions.
Lastly, many elderly people still have good motivation to work. They still want to work even though they have become sixty years old or more. In the U.S., many people in their sixties or seventies are still working at companies. Many Japanese companies should hire elderly people more.
In conclusion, elderly people have good experience and motivation, but have to wait for years to receive their pensions. I believe that compulsory retirement should be abolished.
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