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essay; Have women's attitudes toward work changed?

Have women's attitudes toward work changed?

【original】
A few decades ago, many women in Japan used to work for a few years after graduating high school, and then got married with someone. However, now women’s attitude toward work has dramatically changed.
Firstly, many women now can earn much enough to be independent. Some women have been promoted in companies and get good income. It is reported that some of them do not want to be married with anyone and buy their own house on their own. A couple of decades ago, almost all women could not afford to buy a house and live alone. Many women now are gaining strong power in society and earn money.
Secondly, some women now work for jobs which were once seen as gender-related jobs. An aviation company, which name is JAL, now employs some women as a pilot. In addition, some women now work as a fire fighter. These jobs were once considered as a male’s job. Many women have been trying these tough jobs recently.
Lastly, higher education among women has changed women’s role in society. About fifty years ago, few women went to university, but now many women study there and some can get MBA at school. As they get higher education, they can get more opportunities for work and higher salary. Education has expanded women’s opportunities toward work.
In conclusion, now many women have more opportunities for job and become more independent than ever. I believe that women’s role toward work has changed.




【corrected】

A few decades ago, many women in Japan used to work for a few years after graduating from high school, and then get married with someone. However, now women’s attitude s toward work have dramatically changed.
Firstly, many women now can earn much enough to be independent. Some women have been promoted in companies and get a good income. It is reported that some of them do not want to be married with anyone and want to buy their own house on their own. A couple of decades ago, almost all women could not afford to buy a house and live alone. Many women now are gaining strong power in society and earn good money.
Secondly, some women now work for in jobs which were once seen as gender-related jobs. An aviation company, which whose name is JAL, now employs some women as a pilot s . In addition, some women now work as a fire fighter s . These jobs were once considered as a male’s job. Many women have been trying these tough jobs recently.
Lastly, higher education among women has changed women’s role in society . About fifty years ago, few women went to university, but now many women study there and some can get an MBA at school. As they get higher education, they can get more opportunities for work and higher salary. Education has expanded women’s opportunities toward s work.
In conclusion, now many women have more opportunities for job work and have become more independent than ever. I believe that women’s role toward work has changed.


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