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essay: The prevention of crime is more important than the protection of privacy.

Agree or disagree: The prevention of crime is more important than the protection of privacy.

■ Points - use three of the POINTS below
・Terrorism
・Technology
・Internationalization of crime
・Misuse of data
・Surveillance
・Freedom

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Some people say that crimes should be prevented in advance, but others say that privacy should be protected in any cases. I believe, however, that preventing crime is more important than keeping privacy.
Firstly, censorship can reduce the danger of terrorism. There was a heinous terrorism occurred in the US once, and then the government has decided to censor correspondence using specific technology. To the government, protecting citizens from attacks is important, thus this kind of censorship is necessary to be applied.
Secondly, crimes have become more internationalized. Many criminals try to run away to the other country and stay there in secret. To avoid this, many countries today take fingerprints from immigrants at the airports. To prevent criminals from escaping, it is reasonable to get prints.
Lastly, people have the right to know. If a criminal lives in the town, people would like to know about it because they want to protect themselves and their family members from crimes. The criminal may cause other crimes again, hence it is natural for people to want to know about his/her information.
In conclusion, the prevention of crime has priority compared with the protection of privacy and it leads us to live in safe in our societies.

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【corrected】

Some people say that crimes should be prevented in advance, but others say that privacy should be protected in every case. I believe, however, that preventing crime is more important than keeping privacy.
Firstly, censorship can reduce the danger of terrorism. There was a A heinous act of terrorism occurred in the US once, and then the government has decided to censor correspondence using specific technology. To the government, protecting citizens from attacks is important, thus it is necessary for this kind of censorship is necessary to be applied.
Secondly, crimes have become more internationalized. Many criminals try to run away to the another country and stay there in secret. To avoid this, many countries today take fingerprints from immigrants at the airports. To prevent criminals from escaping, it is reasonable to get prints.
Lastly, people have the right to know. If a criminal lives in the their town, people would like to know about it because they want to protect themselves and their family members from crimes. The criminal may cause other crimes again, hence it is natural for people to want to know about his/her information.
In conclusion, the prevention of crime has priority compared with the protection of privacy and it leads us to live in safely in our societies.
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